statua gentilissima ([info]queenofthorns) wrote in [info]sons_of_gondor,
The only thing I didn't absolutely adore about Peter Jackson's "The Return of the King" (that I'm not confident will be fixed in the extended edition) was Denethor's death. Denethor's always intrigued me so much and so I ended up writing a series of drabbles from his point of view and, err, here they are.

Title: "Seven Stars and Seven Stones"
Author: Queen of Thorns
Pairing: none
Characters: Denethor, Boromir, Faramir
Rating: PG
Summary: Denethor and his sons, from Denethor's POV. This is mostly set in the movieverse, but I had to get that danged Palantir in there anyway so I took a few liberties with the books as well.

Many thanks to my pal [info]adjrun for the beta-help!



"Seven Stars and Seven Stones"

The seeing stone shows Denethor black armies massing under distant stars. It shows him that Gondor is alone, a failing bulwark against the malice of Mordor. He sees the dead White Tree ablaze in the bonfire that is Minas Tirith. He struggles to pull away from the fiery Eye before its gaze can pierce stone and flesh to learn his secret thoughts.

He knows the danger, but each night the ones he loved smile at him from the depths of the palantir. He remembers that long ago, he knew light that did not burn and laughter that was not cruel.

***

Denethor first sees Finduilas at a banquet in her father’s castle by the sea. She is clad in midnight blue and her brother guards her like a jewel of incalculable price. She has stars in her eyes and sunlight in her smile and her name is music. Denethor knows he will wed no woman but this swan princess. He will wait if he must. He has long schooled himself in patience.

The pride of the Steward’s House is nothing to her father, who counts his descent from the Elves. He is not best pleased when Finduilas makes her choice.

***

There is, for once, no duty Denethor must perform. He finds Finduilas in the gardens set high above the city. She comes here often to watch the river and Denethor wonders whether she still longs for the distant sea.

She bends over the baby, tickling him with a stalk of lavender. The sunlight limns each blade of grass and turns the pale hair of his son’s head into a halo of gold. Boromir’s soft hands grasp the plaything with unexpected strength, and he laughs at his mother, his dimpled face beaming with delight. Denethor surrenders his heart without a struggle.

***

Boromir and Finduilas belong to Denethor alone. He need not share their love, as he was forced to share his own father’s regard with a stranger. He has earned this joy, as he did not earn the honors due his father’s son. He needs no others.

Others intrude whether he wills it or not. Finduilas bears a second son and not long afterwards, Denethor notices that a shadow mars the brightness of her eyes. The physicians assure Denethor that the baby did not cause the mother’s illness, but in his heart he cannot forgive Faramir for destroying his perfect happiness.

***

Boromir stands next to the body, silent for once, his ready smile quenched. Denethor’s eyes burn but he cannot weep.

“Where is mother? Why has she gone away?”

Faramir’s words sear Denethor’s heart. Unthinking, he clenches his fist to silence this importunate child. Boromir steps between them as the blow falls. He sways but he stays on his feet and without a word, he takes his brother’s hand and walks away. The next day the mark of the Steward’s ring is a dull red in the center of the dark swelling on Boromir’s jaw.

Denethor never strikes his sons again.

***

Faramir watches, counting the strokes under his breath, as Boromir learns to wield a sword. When Faramir breaks his arm falling from a horse, Boromir grips his brother’s hand while the surgeons set the bone. He boasts to Denethor that Faramir bore the pain without a murmur.

Denethor prides himself on being a just ruler. He knows it is unjust to seek victory over a child. Yet when Boromir praises Faramir’s courage, or smiles at something his brother has said, a sourness rises in Denethor’s throat. He cannot refrain from wielding the words he has honed to a cutting edge.

***

“Faramir shot a bird in mid-flight,” Boromir says.

Denethor raises an eyebrow. “An impressive feat for one so young.”

Faramir flushes in pleasure and a radiant smile lights Boromir’s face. For a heartbeat, Denethor sees their mother in them. Perhaps this is what goads him to continue.

“Arrows are the weapons of a coward,” he says. “You would do better to learn swordsmanship, like your brother.”

Faramir’s voice trembles as he excuses himself from the table. Boromir waits to speak until his brother is out of earshot. “Why, father?” he says.

Denethor cannot answer. They finish their meal in silence.

***

When Boromir is twenty-one, he is named Captain of the White Tower. Resplendent in sable and silver, he kneels and swears his oaths to an empty throne. His father thinks Boromir could be the heir of Elendil. But Denethor can bestow no winged crown on his son, only a horn of bone.

That night Denethor dreams that Boromir and Finduilas are drowning. Finduilas floats away without a struggle, her fingers grazing Denethor’s for but a moment. Boromir’s grip is like iron. Heedless of Denethor’s struggles, he pulls his father down into the depths where sunlight is but a distant rumor.

***

Boromir wears no helm in battle, so that his men may always recognize their captain. The soldiers call him Boromir the Bold. That name makes his father shudder. It is long since Denethor rode out to Gondor’s wars, but he recalls how a body can be broken. Boldness is no shield against an axe to the skull.

His own father warned him that the Palantir was to be used only for Gondor’s direst need. In the grey hours before dawn, Denethor does not remember whether it is Gondor’s need or his own that has driven him to the seeing stone.

***

It is as it was when they were boys. Their laughter ceases when Denethor arrives. As ever, Faramir hungers for praise that he has not earned. Boromir thinks that his father does not notice how he sighs and squares his shoulders, as though Denethor’s presence is a burden. But it is no matter. Boromir has never failed Denethor and he will not do so now.

Gondor has won a great victory at Osgiliath, but Denethor has seen that there is only one thing that will save their people from the coming darkness.

“Bring me back this mighty gift,” he says.

***

In late summer, Boromir crosses the borders of Gondor and passes from his father’s sight. Denethor wonders if the Enemy has cast spells to blind the seeing stone. Or perhaps it is Elvish magic to hide the Ring and the one who carries it.

Many months later, echoes of a distant, desperate horn call come down to the city from the North. Does Boromir summon aid in battle from a fickle ally? Or were the sounds some trick of the wind? Denethor’s unease grows as the Palantir refuses to bend to his will.

There is no news for thirteen days.


***

The south wind carries the promise of spring even into the hall of the kings, but when Denethor pulls away the rough cloth from the errand-rider’s bundle, he knows that winter will never end. He touches the tarnished silver and stained ivory with a steady hand, and keeps his voice as hard as the bands of ice that grip his heart. Other, lesser, men must not presume to pity him.

He waits until the torches gutter and then he climbs to the tower room, as he has done each night since Boromir rode from Osgiliath without bidding his father farewell.

***

“Do you wish our places had been exchanged?” Faramir asks. “Do you wish I had died and Boromir had lived?”

Denethor wishes that he had died ere he sent his son to perish among strangers in a faraway land. For Boromir’s life, he would exchange Faramir and every man in this city and he would not count the cost. But there is nothing left of his son save the shards of a broken heirloom.

Pain so great cannot be endured alone. This time Boromir is not here to take the blow meant for his brother.

“Yes,” Denethor says. “I do.”

***

Night after night, the seeing stone taunts Denethor. It shows him Boromir dying - his hair matted with sweat, his tunic sodden with blood, his eyes dark with despair.

When Denethor sees the body at the foot of the White Tree, he thinks his dreams have pursued him into the daylight. But when he hurries down the steps, it is Faramir who lies unconscious, his armor pierced by many arrows.

It seems Denethor must drain his cup of sorrow to the bitter dregs. Finduilas gave him two sons to cherish and he has sent both of them to their deaths.

***

The gates of the city have fallen and the fires are spreading. Soon there will be nothing left save orcs feasting on the bodies of the dead.

Denethor will not let the creatures of the Enemy desecrate the bones of those whom he has loved. Finduilas is safe, dust buried under stone. Boromir is gone, entrusted to the uncertain mercy of the sea.

But there is one still left. In death, if in nothing else, Denethor will do his duty to Faramir. The pyre is stacked high. The flames will be swifter, and the end kinder than Denethor has deserved.
Tags: character:boromir, character:denethor, character:faramir, fandom:lotr fpf, genre:gen, rating:pg, type:fan fiction

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[info]lilithilien

February 20 2004, 02:22:01 UTC 8 years ago

I didn't think I had it in me, but this *almost* made me cry for Denethor. Your writing is so simple and succinct, yet you convey worlds of emotion. I love it.

In the grey hours before dawn, Denethor does not remember whether it is Gondor’s need or his own that has driven him to the seeing stone.

This is so poignant. I can just see him there, alone and so terribly lonely.

Pain so great cannot be endured alone. This time Boromir is not here to take the blow meant for his brother.

I cried in ROTK when Denethor said he wished Faramir had died instead - but then I cried for Faramir. When I see it again I will think of these lines, and I'm afraid I'll be bawling for both of them.

Thanks for the beautiful drabble!

[info]queenofthorns

February 20 2004, 16:59:59 UTC 8 years ago

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When I see it again I will think of these lines, and I'm afraid I'll be bawling for both of them.

Wow! Thank you - that's a lovely compliment :) I've really always seen Denethor more as tragic and rigid and misguided than as evil or crazy, so I'm glad that came across!

[info]khamira

February 20 2004, 03:46:44 UTC 8 years ago

This was lovely, and chilling, and bitterly real. I have never cared for Denethor, but for the time it took to read this, I did. Very nice story indeed.

[info]queenofthorns

February 20 2004, 16:57:51 UTC 8 years ago

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I have never cared for Denethor, but for the time it took to read this, I did.

Thank you! I really appreciate that comment!

[info]kattahj

February 20 2004, 10:22:47 UTC 8 years ago

Aw. This was fabulous. You brought tears to my eyes. I can't even pick out a favourite, because every one of the drabbles said something new I hadn't thought of and that made me feel for the poor bastard.

[info]queenofthorns

February 20 2004, 16:11:00 UTC 8 years ago

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Oh, thank you so much! ::is all happy that people are crying for Denethor:: ;)

[info]greedy_dancer

February 20 2004, 12:48:47 UTC 8 years ago

this was beautiful. i always pitied Denethor, really, because in the end he realizes what he's done and he dies knowing. what a terrible fate. anyway, IMO you captured his struggle very well.
i just spotted a little thing, in the 9th drabble, you wrote that name makes makes his father shudder
:)

[info]queenofthorns

February 20 2004, 15:51:01 UTC 8 years ago

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i just spotted a little thing, in the 9th drabble, you wrote that name makes makes his father shudder

Oh, thanks so much! It's fixed now ... phew! This is why I should always have someone *else* proofread for me!

I never *loved* Denethor as I loved, say, Theoden - but I think D. is such a compelling and tragic figure - someone who loses everyone he loves and it's kind of his own fault in at least two of those cases ... and I'm so glad you think I showed that in some little way.

[info]niennahirilfea

February 21 2004, 01:02:24 UTC 8 years ago

*bows*

that was brilliant! I'll be thinking of that line in the film now too. You managed to bring across how hopeless it all seems to D *sniffle* Great stuff.

[info]queenofthorns

February 21 2004, 19:25:43 UTC 8 years ago

Re: *bows*

Awww, thanks, darling! I think I've said this lots of times to you, but although I never *liked* Denethor, I always was very moved by his tragic ending.

[info]littlevagabond

March 2 2004, 12:27:49 UTC 8 years ago

This was very beautiful indeed. You captured the characters so well and made me see behind the cold cruel behaviour of Denethor. One has to pity him. A broken man, who has lost the ones he loves.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. :-)

[info]queenofthorns

March 7 2004, 13:21:19 UTC 8 years ago

Oh, thanks so much for your very kind words - I've always found Denethor to be one of the more intriguing characters in LOTR!
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